Test Screening Feedback

1.
Media Language (A-E)------B
Conventions (A-E)-------B
Creativity (A-E) ----------B
Attention to Detail (A-E) ------C
Technical Proficiency (A-E) --------C


2. positive

(cinematography?)
(mise en scene?) good set out, very realistic, well spaced
(lighting?) natural look, no artificial lighting so very positive
(sound?) just the voice of the surgeon
(conventions? matching audience?)very grippin, good and detailed

3. critisism

(cinematography?) ??
(mise en scene?) shaking camera
(lighting?) could be brightened up a bit
(sound?) cant hear ant much in the interview
(conventions? matching audience?) none
(miscellaneous) could have used a tripod